In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies. Discuss the advantages and dis advantages for young people who decide to do this.
In some countries, especially in Europe, a lot of young people are encouraged to take the gap year between finishing high school and starting universities studies. students who decide to take a year to work or travel like this will face both advantages and disadvantages. In this essay will analyze the benefits and also the downside of taking a gap year.
gap year is being considered by many students and parents as young people will have the opportunities to find their career interest. By doing a variety of jobs, they will eventually know what their strength is and what they are passionate about. Each job or each activity will help students explore and learn new things which they are hardly be taught at school by participating in volunteering, part-time job, organizations, etc. For instance, young people who have real experience during their gap year will choose their major more accurately due to their career interest and have the tendency to remain to be involved in their chosen career. Opposite to that, those who straightly go to the universities without knowing anything about their major will be shocked and start feeling exhausted and tend to drop out of school. this leads to higher unemployment in many countries and seriously impact the nation's GDP.
On the other hand, taking gap year may have some downsides as it will be destructive for students if it's not well-planned. Instead of being involved in different kind of jobs, students may also be involved in inappropriate activities such as drugs, alcohol, violence, etc. they will lose their direction and easy to get out of track. The reason for this is that students are not old enough to understand how harsh life is. they may not be able to control themselves when negative activities seduce them. For instance, a young man in Viet Nam, during his gap year, he was seduced by a stranger to sell drugs for him as this'll bring him higher income than any jobs he was currently doing. The man was so naive that he decided to take that inappropriate activity. he soon then lost himself and be captured by the police at a very young age, losing youth forever.
In conclusion, taking a year before going to university will help students to discover their career interest, but it also needs to be planned carefully if young people don't want to lose their future. In general, the gap year is relevant to students and they should be encouraged to take it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, in general, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81100478469 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66902994358 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528708133971 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3616997339 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.842105263 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26411102221 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857045325285 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1001207683 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192744049718 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125156432132 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.