Franchise x Independent Business
The reading passage and the lecture have conflicting opinions about buying a franchise or start an independent business. The article presumes that, a franchise is more secure and it requires less initial investment. On the other hand, the professor casts doubts on what is presented on the text and believes that buying a franchise has no better advantages than start a new business.
First of all, according to the reading the franchisers does not have to face the problem of finding a reliable suppliers, because franchise contract specified their own partners suppliers. However, the lecturer disputes this point by saying that franchise owners are forced to buy specific products and services from their partner suppliers. This type of contract dos not allow the franchisers to look better or any cheaper commodity.
Secondly, the reading states that franchisers gets the benefits of sophisticated and expensive advertising paid by parent company. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes this argument by saying that the parent company actually advertise their own brands and products, not the franchisers specific business site. Moreover, the franchisers have to pay part of their profits to marketing.
Finally, the reading claims that it is more secure to have a franchise because an inexperienced business owner have possibility to start from an already solid model, with a low risk of failure. On the other hand, the professor believes that an alternative to succeed as a first time business owner is to buy an existing business by a previous owner. She holds her opinion by saying that a recent research shows that independent business have twice more chances to survive during the first four years than a franchise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'supplier'?
Suggestion: supplier
... face the problem of finding a reliable suppliers, because franchise contract specified t...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e lecturer disputes this point by saying that franchise owners are forced to buy ...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lecturer refutes this argument by saying that the parent company actually advert...
^^
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er refutes this argument by saying that the parent company actually advertise th...
^^
Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re secure to have a franchise because an inexperienced business owner have possib...
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Line 7, column 389, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
...r. She holds her opinion by saying that a recent research shows that independent business have tw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 275.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30181818182 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83721199434 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5626294343 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06452816374 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360398908739 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126673186664 0.0996497079465 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037822337054 0.0662205650399 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207823303748 0.162205337803 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347948962901 0.0443174109184 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.