Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
some people believe that life will be simple if there are just some languages in the world even several languages seemed like to be disappear is a hot topic for debate. In my front of view, I convinced that it is necessary to maintain every languages in the world.
The first and the most important reason is language is the result of a culture. Every nation in the world need thousands of year to create and develop their language that each resident take the responsibility to use and prevent them from die out. As a result, if we let a language extinct, the previous ‘s generation achievement mean not thing.
Another strong argument that language is the precious and they prove for the appearance of every culture. Language stand for the tradition and it is one of the most important ingredients contribute to human development. A culture or a nation will fall if their language disappear due to language transmit a lot of information about the history, the knowledge and they are the equipment in order to understand some ancient documents.
In addition, many people convinced that the fewer languages the world have, the more convenient we are. I totally disagree with this opinion. Nowadays, it is necessary for human to have a language which everyone use to connect and work oversea but it doesn’t mean some unpopular languages can die out easily. We can maintain and develop them to protect the variety of the world.
In conclusion, life will be easier if people use a language to exchange information with each other all over the world, but it is important to protect some languages from die out in order to develope each tradition culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
some people believe that life will be simple...
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Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...human to have a language which everyone use to connect and work oversea but it does...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72207894046 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2409701262 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414066688057 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148843923124 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823536153147 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241411992755 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059387225347 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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