if this portrait for Jane or not?
The reading and the listening sections both talk about the painting that shows Jane, one of the most famous English novelists. The reading passage claims that there are good reasons to believe that she is the subject of the canvas when she was a teenager. While the listening refutes that by providing many convincing reasons.
First of all, the reading talks about Jane's family, that they gave permission to use the portrait as an illustration in an edition of her letters. The professor in the lecture counters this by saying that Jane died from 70 years ago, so her family members have never seen her before.
In addition to that, the reading claims that the face of the portrait resembles one of Cassandras sketch, which depicts Jane. The sketch defines details about Auston face, similar in the face trait nearly and in the same age, teenager juncture. The lecturer claims that this canvas could be for one of her relatives because her family was extended, there were many teenager girls from them like her niece Marry.
Finally, the reading says that the canvas was unsigned and undated, so there is evidence that she was a teenager, when it was painted, also the artist who taught that he drew the canvas lived in the same period when she was a teenager. While the listening counters that by saying the date when the canvas sold by William, who did not sell it in London shows that this canvas painted when her age was about 72 years old not when she was a teenager.
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- if this portrait for Jane or not? 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of the canvas when she was a teenager. While the listening refutes that by providing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 12.0772626932 190% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65900383142 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20798052349 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524904214559 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1341334247 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.6 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163543537424 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652969995437 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619944604885 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106604410073 0.162205337803 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741576898721 0.0443174109184 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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