Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Schools are temple and education is a passport to future, for tomorrow belongs to those who prepare for it today. Now a days administrations give more time to encouraging the students towards our culture and traditions however some opposed to the notion that they should approach their students to learn practical handful skills which will certainly help them in bright future. I partially accord with the statement.
To embark on, in the justification of my notion, teachers should make familiar with our ancestors, rebellions, wining battels against strongest armours to the students from that they actually get to know about there culture, where they come from exactly. some people are passionate about genalogy, apparently it is a marvallous source of income for there life moreover there are archaic medical treatment buried in our ancient history books with surprisingly effective results which can come handy in catastrophic situations without any modern life saving equipments.
However,it is irrefutable that in this modern era technology is flourished with leaps and bounds which is the main cause of disappearing our traditional values. Computers and internet are giving cut throut competition where other values cannot stand with ground. Furthermore, it is apparent if the history is bound to disappear then only modern technical handful skills can offer people a enurmerous platform for exquisite jobs with secure future.
To conclude, history is carrier of civilisation, without it we are empty and unknown to our tribes but in the intense temptation of technology, people are delighted to remove all ancient things of no use and are possession of numerous gadgets to survive in technological world for desperately earning money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46691176471 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88589358991 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643382352941 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.8295522513 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.222222222 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132084024162 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474805338209 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590844476807 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750092126043 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562134659738 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.