Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Globalization and the technological advancements, are two of the core reasons that have bought massive changes in most of the countries. It is like the double-edged sword that has favorable and unfavorable consequences. Deforestation, pollution, growing population and education, are few of the foreseen challenges, that majority of the countries would be dealing with, in the near future. In the following paragraphs, I would elaborate in detail about these problems, associated reasons and some suggestions for it.
If I would take into account an example of my country, India; there are various issues that need urgent remedies. Pollution, it is an ongoing threat that a majority of the metropolitans cities are facing. There are cities like Delhi and Mumbai, where the air quality has detoriorated to such an extent that it is now considered toxic for the people to breathe in.
Second most matter, that is a cause of worry, is the ever-growing population. Globalization and the easy availability of transport has made it easy for humans to migrate to the industrial hubs in search of work. As a result, the population is increasing at an enormous rate in these cities, which leads to overcrowding and shortage of other basic resources like the food and the shelter.
It is high time for the government to look into such matters and try to find the adequate solutions. Firstly, the authorities should try and educate the locals about the problems that our future generation will have to deal with. Secondly, to control the pollution the government must have strict regulations for the vehicles in regards to its PUC.
Furthermore, we must also have 1 child policy in India like China, to reduce the problem of population. If the right measures are taken at the right time, we will be able to safeguard ourselves from the mentioned evils.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 134, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...utions. Firstly, the authorities should try and educate the locals about the problems t...
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Line 6, column 327, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ave strict regulations for the vehicles in regards to its PUC. Furthermore, we must also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07868852459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99605760846 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6586035172 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13286364312 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036457647447 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359989254255 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655501147257 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356773763914 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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