People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice
Nowadays, everybody listens to a different type of music depending on their situation. Even if you are not a big fan, you will find yourself from time to time listening to your favorite song. I believe that music has become such an important factor in our life for two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, humans are very social creatures. Therefore, most of the time we need to be around other people to feel good, and one of the best ways to do so, is through music. Whether it is a huge festival, concert, or a night club people come to socialize and to enjoy the music that is being played. I, for example, come from a small and economically poor country called Kosovo. However, for some unknown reason we are culturally very rich. And because of that, there has been a large number of music festivals held here. Hence, me and my friends were lucky enough to go to one of them called Sunny Hill. Part of this festival was very famous artist Dua Lipa, who performed in ways we had never seen before. Moreover, what made this experience even better was the fact that there were thousands of people from around the world, who came to this small country, just to listen to their favorite artist. This is a very good example from my own experience that demonstrates the important role that music plays in uniting people.
Secondly, sometimes, bad things happen to us and as a result our mood changes for worse, we feel stressed, anxious or not motivated enough to do things we should do to reach whatever goal we have. But when we listen to our favorite music, we feel more relaxed and more confident about whatever obstacle in front of us. For example, if you look at almost all world-class players of any sport, they have one thing in common, they are always listening to music through headphones, while warming up, and they do this because music helps them to get mentally ready for the game. Furthermore, results of many experiments show that players who have a habit of listening to music perform better than those who do not. This illustrates how listening to music affects our mood in a good way.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that music is a very good way to make yourself feel better and to socialize with other people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ch. And because of that, there has been a large number of music festivals held here. Hence, me an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59803921569 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39719414992 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55637254902 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7829082129 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7368421053 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4736842105 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239295634382 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713863172724 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482317389026 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129927094696 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471402248135 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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