Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowadays, with the rapid development of the living conditions, more and more people lay emphasis on leisure entertainment, especially traveling. Some people recommend that joining a travel group equipped with a tour guide is the best way of traveling. Such kind of traveling indeed has advantages in some way. However, from my own perspective, it may not be the best way on the whole.
There is no doubt that traveling in a group genuinely saves time and money, which makes us easier to prepare for a trip coming towards us, traveling abroad in particular. When we decide to sign a contract with the travel agency, all that we have to do is nothing but to get prepared for the documents and certificates required from the agency with models and instructions in hand. The moment we finish the necessary materials, we are done,waiting for the upcoming trip when those who choose to travel without groups are dedicated to heaps of issues for example visas, tour plans, transport and accommodation and so on, tired and exhausted with much more time and energy spent.
However, traveling in a group with a tour guide also has some disadvantages which may make the trip less pleasant. When it comes to tour groups, every individual is morally obliged to obey the rules and orders raised by the tour guide, adding inconvenience to the whole trip while those individual travelers may not face this situation, enjoying themselves freely instead. In addition, the traveling atmosphere even gets worse when accompanied with travelers lacking in sense of team spirit, only to satisfy themselves in a selfish way, leaving the whole group waiting or finding them regardless of the time or space. In that way, traveling independently may be a better choice.
Moreover, when traveling in groups led by a tour guide, we may waste time and money unconsciously, creating more expenses or even trouble and chaos beyond expectation. Take a real case into consideration. As was reported on the Internet, a group traveling in Yun Nan Province were forced to buy souvenirs by their tour guide. When some travelers refused to do so, the tour guide unexpectedly took off a knife, leaving the whole group trapped in a bus with the door closed,threatening them to buy products. Though the issue was well solved ultimately, punishing those guilty and compensating for the involvers, it reflects that traveling in a group does not absolutely stand for safety and security generally speaking.
To put it in a nutshell, despite the convenience group tour may bring up in some cases, traveling in a group may force the travelers to keep to the tight plan unfreely and even put travelers into an unsafe situation to some extent. Accordingly, I am in disagreement with the statement that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in particular, kind of, no doubt, in some cases, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93487394958 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89376172062 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518907563025 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4381616072 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305832198294 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11702502536 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847052813434 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192407065104 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378849563663 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.