The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public.
It is thought by some that the state spend huge amount of money to detect a life in different planets as a result a few people believe that it is wasting of money by the government and that the money ought to be spent on problems connected with public. In my opinion, while space exploration can help humankind to develop technologies and medicine, I believe that before doing it humans should solve all public problems.
Firstly, it must be admitted that space exploration in order to find new organisms enhance scientists to develop technology and medicine. In other words, scientists have to develop existent technologies from year to year as they have to discover further and further into the space. Furthermore, in order to send humans to distant planets scientists should create new medicine and ways to prevent ageing or create ultra-new space ships that can reach light speed as planets are located far from the Earth. In addition, space exploration will help people to reveal space secrets and open new physics laws.
On the other hand, people have a huge number of problems on the Earth and should spend money to tackle them firstly. For example, many undeveloped countries still suffer from water and food shortage, thousands and millions die from diseases that were defeated a hundred years ago due to drug shortage and poor medical conditions. Another point to consider is education, an increasing number of people do not have an opportunity to get university degree due to poverty, as a result young people commit crimes in order to feed themselves and their families. Only monetary help might prevent above-mentioned issues.
In conclusion, Although space exploration is beneficial for technology and medicine I believe that governments should spend all money to solve problems that people face around the world
- The palns below show the layout of a university’s sport centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. 56
- Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school.Do you agree or disagree. 56
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 56
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 61
- The chart below shows the amount of profit made by a SMG entertainment a record company from different formats in three European countries and are measured in million euros 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oblems that people face around the world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08637873754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69423131009 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0514163664 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.181818182 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9090909091 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265935429253 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105241946859 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146914470353 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196636393271 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125598113205 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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