Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Education is key to success , it leave permanent impression people's mind , they can not turn blind eye to their importance . It is irrefutable to say that , student can not get success in their study due to financial problems , it is a serious problem in these days , If some strict plans are not formulated problems can be worsed. No doubt, reasons are many behind financial problem among students and expenditure of accommodation . But fortunately it is not to late to solve.
the foremost impact to note is that undergraduate students have a bundle of worries and they comfort hardships with economically as inflation is increasing continuously, so it is very difficult to survive because most of the students study away from their home town and they spend enough money on the accommodation food and an entertainment sources so forcefully they go through to work apart from this high cost education is also main cause of Under Pressure such as many college and university with high fee also set high tuition fee .Some families cannot fully afford their children's education. consequently, students have to work to pay University and college fees.
The key solution is that it is a prime duty of administrations to keep an eye on inflation and they should reduce the education fees, impart unpaid education as well as possible.besides this university and colleges should give accommodation Services free of cost as a result children can easily concentrate on their study and make a good grades and finally the sky scrapping their career.
To conclude ,it is denied to say that student face financial problem and expenditure of computation if the government and colleges give facility free of cost then the problem can be handled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, if, so, then, well, apart from, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04195804196 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99243650456 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.412868011 49.4020404114 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.25 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.75 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.625 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134233014144 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542095344988 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301573683765 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775078134274 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245079079016 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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