The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided table illustrates the outcomes of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (all aged 16 or over) whether they were a part of cultural activities in last one year.
According to the table, it is clear that 16-24 age people had taken participation in most number of cultural activities. Any performance which includes dancing,singing,playing musical instruments and acting had the most number of participation in last 12 month. People age 16 to 24, almost a third (35%) citizens participated in any performance cultural activities which was highest, where 22% of participation were of 22 to 24 age people and all age 16 and over. The participation in any visual arts were double than any writing cultural activities.
The people age 16 to 24 and 25 to 44, the cultural activities of undertaking any crafts and cultural purchases, the equal number of humans were participated (11% and 17% respectively). There were least number of participation were there in computer based activities.
Overall, there were highest number of participation were there in any performance activities in where computer based had lowest number of participation in last one year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , singing
.... Any performance which includes dancing,singing,playing musical instruments and acting ...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'were the least'.
Suggestion: were the least
...cipated 11% and 17% respectively. There were least number of participation were there in c...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'were the highest'.
Suggestion: were the highest
...ter based activities. Overall, there were highest number of participation were there in a...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
...ance activities in where computer based had lowest number of participation in last one yea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22340425532 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36219024197 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473404255319 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6225599885 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 5.23603664747 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209572611873 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11610585412 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123370839386 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17308590464 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144462155295 0.0819641961636 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.