In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?
In Kazakhstan, many young families choose temporary accommodation. This is because the ownership of an apartment is out of prise and, therefore, renting is the only option for them. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of leasing an apartment.
Let us start with the positive effects. One of them is the affordability for families with low incomes. Renting houses costs much less than paying a mortgage a month for many years: therefore, many couples resort to renting rather than taking a loan from a bank to buy an apartment. Another advantage is the ability to rent a housing close to the office. Many families are often offered a dream job, but they have to refuse it because the workplace is a long distance from home. In this case, renting allows them to relocate and work at their desirable jobs.
Despite these advantages, renting causes many drawbacks. One of the disadvantages is the discomfort of sharing an apartment with other people. Since many cities are overcrowded, many families have to share accommodation with someone else, causing some inconvenience to them. Another drawback is the frequent change of schools for children. Children often suffer from having to change school friends when their parents decide to lease a house in another part of the city, resulting in the absence of friends and poor performance at school.
In conclusion, even though renting often allows families to have a place to live in and relocate in case of attractive job offer, it may cause discomfort and stress for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04296875 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74217358882 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3331034477 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201309557144 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627084763749 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582723745451 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11144919217 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834072637739 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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