You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
• Describe the item
• Explain where and when you left it
• Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inquire about an item which I lost while travelling from Delhi to Ajmer. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I was carrying a black suitcase with travel stickers on the front and the back which gave it a unique look. It also had a Samsonite marking engraved on the front. Additionally, it had a luggage tag which mentioned my name, address and contact details. The incident happened on the train while boarding the superfast express train from Delhi like all travellers I had kept the suitcase in the overhead storage box. However, since the train arrived late and I was rushing late for a meeting so I forgot my suitcase on the train. Although it was only when I reached my hotel I realized that my luggage was missing and tried to reach the railway customer care department which took the ticket details from me.
Lastly, I would request you find my luggage as it contains important official documents which are immediately required for tender submission. For your information, I was seated in AC third tier compartment and my seat no was 32B. I hope these details will prove helpful in locating my suitcase.
I look forward to your soonest response in this matter.
Yours sincerely
Said
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| 2019-04-05 | vinshu koul | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inquire abo...
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Line 6, column 219, Rule ID: NOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...n AC third tier compartment and my seat no was 32B. I hope these details will prov...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse in this matter. Yours sincerely Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, lastly, look, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 5.60731707317 589% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77314814815 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60183125733 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3657554875 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3076923077 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104833504511 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350207845714 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302566920264 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628301672211 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279370640405 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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