You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
• explain the reason why you decline the offer
• express your gratitude
• explain why you like your current job very much
Dear Sir/Madam
This is with reference to the recent Job offer for the post of Design engineer from your company.
I regret to inform you that I cannot accept your offer at this time . However, I appreciate and thank you for considering my profile. I would like to reason out for decline your offer ,
First and foremost , The work location is way too far my home and have to spend more than hours commuting to work,This will be very stressful and would also affect my personal life. I being a father of two children would like to spend quality time with my family and cannot compromise on this,
Furthermore this would also affect my performance and will not be in condition to befit the company .I have good life and work balance with my current Job which gives me an opportunity to be me focused and has excel in profession. In the best interest of all ,I have decide to decline your offer and pursue withcurrent company.
I appreciate your efforts and time ,Thanks again for your consideration.
Yours faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Job) must be used with a third-person verb: 'offers'.
Suggestion: offers
...his is with reference to the recent Job offer for the post of Design engineer from yo...
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Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... I cannot accept your offer at this time . However, I appreciate and thank you for...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ike to reason out for decline your offer , First and foremost , The work locati...
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Line 6, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cline your offer , First and foremost , The work location is way too far my hom...
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Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve to spend more than hours commuting to work,This will be very stressful and wou...
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Line 6, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , This
...spend more than hours commuting to work,This will be very stressful and would also a...
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Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...and would also affect my personal life. I being a father of two children would li...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...not be in condition to befit the company .I have good life and work balance with m...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...t be in condition to befit the company .I have good life and work balance with my...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'excelled'.
Suggestion: excelled
...an opportunity to be me focused and has excel in profession. In the best interest of ...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... profession. In the best interest of all ,I have decide to decline your offer and ...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'decided'.
Suggestion: decided
...on. In the best interest of all ,I have decide to decline your offer and pursue withcu...
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Line 8, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...any. I appreciate your efforts and time ,Thanks again for your consideration. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71111111111 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57100195674 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605555555556 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.651288113 44.8134815571 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.142857143 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 4.34317383033 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219059044119 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118164648908 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552032433456 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130414129684 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099246909763 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.