You can't attend a meeting with your friend.
In your letter:
cancel the meeting and apologies
explain why you cancel
suggest where and when you could see each other
Dear Michaell,
How is it going? I hope the meeting preparation is going excellent, I reckon the meeting will be successful.
I am writing you because I think I won't be able to attend due to my exam was rescheduled to that Saturday when your meeting is and you know that this English exam is really important for me because of my visa application depends on it.
I really apologise for this, I never expected that change on my exam date, If you like I will visit you on Sunday morning and I will help you to do cleaning and you tell me how the meeting was, that would be so exciting for me because I want to know some reactions from people that don't know what was the meeting for.
I am really happy to know you will do this meeting but I am so sad because I could not be able to attend.
I will see you on Sunday.
Regards,
David.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f my visa application depends on it. I really apologise for this, I never expe...
^
Line 8, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this, I never expected that change on my exam date, If you like I will visit you ...
^^
Line 8, column 284, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...to know some reactions from people that dont know what was the meeting for. I am ...
^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... dont know what was the meeting for. I am really happy to know you will do thi...
^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cause I could not be able to attend. I will see you on Sunday. Regards, ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, i reckon, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27607361963 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34750574943 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527607361963 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.611252613 44.8134815571 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 16.8248392259 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270688053104 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12689130117 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858748648511 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174154664402 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042518961505 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.