Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.
In this modern-era, why children learn to start an alien language at school life, it is only because of people move to foreign countries for study and several reasons. some psychologist suggest that the primary level suits more for learning an alien language. The below essay evaluates the merits and demerits of this proposition and find out which of these outweigh the other.
one advantage of learning of new languages at primary school is that it is easier to learn the foreign language at younger age than later. In addition to this, in the 6 to 11 age, children are more capable to do for learning an alien language among with their mother tongue. According to the report of U.A.E, in the primary level, students are 80% more capable than students of secondary school for learning a different languages along with the Arabic language.
Another reason for why foreign languages is better introduced at primary school time is that at this stage, children have to learn few disciplines. In further, there are more subjects introduced in secondary school level compared to elementary level of school.
However, there are not only have merits of primary level for teaching foreign languages but also there some drawbacks at this stage. Firstly, in this primary level, it is difficult to teach more than one language for teacher because of children are doing to play more and to study less. For instance, teacher had faced critical situation for studying foreign languages at their childhood age.
To conclude this topic, it is obvious that the advantages of learning an alien languages at primary stage outweigh its demerits. So, it is suggested that children can able to learn very well if one or two foreign will introduce in primary school.
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also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01706484642 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51277531178 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474402730375 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0582752751 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.501724179576 0.244688304435 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207026278432 0.084324248473 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825633854536 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321241588695 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498681838547 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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