At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Nowadays every countries have a large population of young demos, while some demos consider that this is beneficial, others believe that, for maintaining the proper stability, there should be complete mix of young and old demos is essential. This essay will scrutinize both sides of the argument before completing a reasoned conclusion.
There are unquestionably various benefits to having more young demos. Incipiently, young demos are more productive than old demos. They are also disease-free. For example, country like India, there are many educated and skilled young demos. Therefore, industries today have no scarcity to find talented people. To bring about necessary changes to build nation. For this type of ability, there is another behoof of having large population of young demos. As per need, old style of thinking and challenges, young demos change their attitude also. By this, it will help to grow and gain power for the country development on the world-wide. As the young people are healthier, so they spend less for healthcare.
On the other hand, there are also some disadvantage to have more young demos. It will make the problem for youngsters, if there are not enough employment opportunities. In present scenario, India has high unemployment rate because of higher number of youngsters in the age bracket of 21-40.
In the conclusion, when we look at absolute difference in positive changes, youngsters can bring for society. It is not difficult to see the behoof of having more number of young demos which counterbalance the disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...nges, young demos change their attitude also. By this, it will help to grow and gain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25547445255 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85281958292 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.40164606 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317886645653 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967615222981 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172445724582 0.0667982634062 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249844198917 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.267863840697 0.056905535591 471% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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