The best way to reduce youth crime is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays crime and violence has become very common among young people. educating parents with parenting skills is the ideal path to prevent crimes committed by youngsters. I feel that this could be one of the ways to face such issues but, this alone cannot solve the scenario's leading to crimes, as I think crime among younger population is a multi-factorial problem and children also need to be educated together with the society and teachers to have a positive impact.
Firstly, no doubt responsibility of a parent is imperative in the behavioral development of the youth, but it is not wise to solely blame the family members for certain characteristics of a child. Moreover, a young person should have all the opportunities to get educated. educating children by sending them to schools were they are taught moral values is a better option and not completely relying on parental skills, which might be impossible for some people to get due to various reasons such as lack of time, finances and even interest itself. Hence, it will be a total waste if we try to approach this problem in this way.
Secondly, society plays a vital role in achieving changes in the mind of a adolescent, simply by creating new rules and taking stringent action against crimes, would install fear in the brains of the people. For example, decreasing the punishable age for youth shall instil some fear towards crime. Furthermore, educators in schools and colleges need to constantly remind their pupils about the anti-social activities, which may land them in to trouble.
To summaraise, I feel that, just by imparting parenting skills in mothers and fathers is not going to have a major impact in the youth, who are drifting towards criminal activities. Eventually this can only be tackled by multidimensional approach involving the community, teachers and parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, i think, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07516339869 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87006443368 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630718954248 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5524100652 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203199870289 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692247828456 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748279786466 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111674879561 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526366173188 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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