In many countries, the rich are becoming richer and poor are becoming poorer.
Why is this a problem?
What solutions are there to tackle this problem?
The most of the nation, the affluent people are becoming more affluent whereas the deprive class people are becoming poor than ever. I will discuss in this easy about the reason and the actions we should take to resolve this issue in my further paragraphs.
On the one side of the coin, the rich people are getting richer because they have the knowledge of most of the aspects such as investing money in those sector from where they can expect to get a huge profit. Secondly, as they are aware of the population issue, they prefer to have only one daily of their own or sometimes they adopt one from any orphanage.
On the other side of the coin, the poor people have less knowledge about population control due to which they are having minimum of 5 to 6 children of their own. The more the family member the more the requirement of the food. as they have to survive once their children are able to walk properly and talk as well, they immediately take them along to do the same kind of laborer work. Because as per their opinion, if the whole family gets into such work they will earn wages on daily basis which help them to survive effortlessly.
To conclude, once a famous person said, " to born poor is not your fault but to die is". So in my opinion the government should take necessary action against population and advice the same mostly to the laborer section. Moreover, the children of the below poverty line should be taught without a fee. All those people should be taught the value of life and money as well and how to invest and save money so that in future one can live a happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sector' or 'those sectors'?
Suggestion: this sector; those sectors
... the aspects such as investing money in those sector from where they can expect to get a hug...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...r the more the requirement of the food. as they have to survive once their childre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46283783784 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18889460397 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8897569342 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.083333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0758290465523 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284089604328 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446659512475 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583475550066 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733230959369 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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