The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts illustrate presence of the nutrients in typical meals in percentage; all these nutrients are considered unfavorable for health if consumed more than required.
Overall, the presence of sodium and saturated fats are the highest in dinner whereas presence of added sugar is the highest in snacks. However, in breakfast meal, all the three nutrients are the lowest.
In lunch meal, both sodium and saturated fats share almost same level in lunch, which are at 29% and 26% respectively. However, the amount of sugar in lunch is adequate. While snacks and breakfast contain same amount of sodium, the added sugar's presence is quite different in snacks and breakfast, which are at 42% and 16% respectively.
Although lunch contains significant amount of sodium, at 29%, and saturated fats, at 26%, dinner have both the nutrients at the highest level (sodium at 43% and saturated fat at 37%). Moreover, the added sugar is also higher in dinner compare to lunch.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sugars'' or 'sugar's'?
Suggestion: sugars'; sugar's
...ontain same amount of sodium, the added sugars presence is quite different in snacks a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14375 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62302753274 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.063574829 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0517799944435 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298890369587 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379402527767 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416192941437 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307720214337 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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