People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons
(for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.).
Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Students join college for various purposes such as enhancing experience, Career prospects, Gaining knowledge etc. However, there are few people, who attend college for other reasons,
In my perspective, people attend college for better Career prospects. I shall explain it in detail in this essay.
Foremost, The main aim of any college or universities as institutional establishment is to spread provide knowledge. One of the main reason that many students attend college is to do higher studies, the studies that can fetch promising jobs, For instance in the current scenario, IT industries has huge demand and opportunities for computer or software programmers. As per the survey done by the university of London in 2017, Most of the students from south India prefer doing higher studies
in computer science .
Let me explain the Second reason, People who has passion of their interest, pursue higher studies to gain more knowledge in interested filed. For instance, my wife is fond of medical science, to fulfill her wish she did her masters in gynaecology and excelled in her profession. The statistics show that people who attend college to study subjects of their interest have outshined always. However, they number their less in comparison with career preparation group.
There are few other reasons also why some people go to college such as social status, Family pressure and some for fun However In my opinion most of the students attend college or university for better career prospects , As, for survival a person needs job which can achieved by doing higher studies at colleges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24902723735 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71489253255 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9467204153 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.636363636 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413024422794 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143383527586 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112875097318 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205633521375 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105780954481 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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