You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some
problems with the internet connection in your room.
Write to the supervisor of your residence. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Inform him / her of the situation
Request that the problem be fixed
Dear Sir,
I am writing this epistle in reference to complain about erratic internet connection in my room. Let me explain the situation in detail.
My name is Ben Shaw, a 2nd-year computer science student current staying in Westley hostel room no 101. I would like to inform you that I having been facing technical problems with the internet connectivity in my room over the past few weeks. Although the internet connection usually works fine however over the past few weeks the connection has been intermittent. The situation is particularly worst in the night when I am unable to connect to the free WI-FI network of the campus. This has made my life miserable as I have to use an expensive data connection from my mobile phone to do the assignments. Additionally, the lack of internet connectivity is also affecting my preparation for semester exams which are due next week.
Lastly, I would request you to take a note of my complaint and send an engineer by tomorrow so that internet connectivity can be immediately resolved.
I look forward to your response and immediate resolution.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...no 101. I would like to inform you that I having been facing technical problems w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, lastly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97872340426 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90947236197 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1340728266 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233060207165 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891107738938 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513479536341 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116207977157 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315572664881 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.