What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years, antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why?
In the last century, there has been many breakthrough such as medicines, aviation and computers. I believe, among all of these innovations, computers is the most important one because of their use in different occupations like Medical centers, Aircrafts due to their effective time saving computational speed, and providing employment to many IT professionals.
For the past 100 years, scientists have discovered many important things, and among them, computer is the most vital discovery. Firstly, computers have enabled various professionals in the fields of Medical care, Aviation, Space exploration with speedy results in few seconds. For instance, doctors use a software in their computers to calculate the body mass index of an individual. Similarly, pilot trainees use simulation software in computers to learn to fly airplanes. As a result, patients receive instant feedback from doctors about their health conditions after undergoing health checkup, and pilot trainees learn to fly airplanes with a few months of training using their computers.
Moreover, computers have created millions of jobs for people. To illustrate, A recent article stated that Information Technology employs highest number of IT professionals in the world.
In conclusion, although there has been many inventions since the last 100 years. I believe, computers is the most important invention of all the others.
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- What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years, antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun breakthrough seems to be countable; consider using: 'many breakthroughs'.
Suggestion: many breakthroughs
In the last century, there has been many breakthrough such as medicines, aviation and comput...
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Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...entury, there has been many breakthrough such as medicines, aviation and computer...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'employs the highest'.
Suggestion: employs the highest
...icle stated that Information Technology employs highest number of IT professionals in the world...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, similarly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68246445498 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03280507219 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611374407583 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.938260246 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221354656521 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956298583961 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958325110338 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144394376389 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831409572972 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.