In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Some think this is good. While other believe this is a problem for s country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Due to advancement of technology and medicine, more and more people tend to have a longer life than before and several countries have to face adversity of having ageing societies. Despite some minor drawbacks, I think that living longer is a positive trend.
There are three advantages when people live longer. Firstly, old people have more experience and can contribute their witness by counselling young generation. In some careers such as teachers, experienced teachers can better guide their children than the young ones. Secondly, because of their precious knowledge in cultures, traditions and history, the elderly are inevitably practical in telling stories which happened in the past. Moreover, since young people are always busy and unable to appropriately look after their kids, so old people are the best companion with those kids and can help them grow up in good environment rather than in a child care center.
However, there are some drawbacks of having the old, first of all, young people and governments are liable in taking care of the old generations. when people reach an age that they are unable to support their own living, the government have to take care of them by providing financial assistance. Thus, it means that more tax must be collected in order to support old people. Apart from that, the nation will lack human resources which are vital to develop countries. Seniors are more prone to have health problems and cannot do much tasks that require physical power.
In conclusion, health and financial problems of the old are somewhat concerned, seniors can still help and be beneficial in specific tasks driving their countries forward.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, apart from, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19117647059 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59115810904 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9630944221 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873894899707 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329307080322 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212943842888 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555957225182 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00682026487081 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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