Child labour is a major concern all around the world what are the causes of it? How can the problem is solved?
In this world, child labour is the major concern all around the globe due to the delinquency. Therfore,the different types of menace seen in the society for the wards. So this essay shall analyse the rationales as well as plausible solution to curb this peril along with the lucrative conclusion in the upcoming paragraph.
To begin with , there are multifarious points which elucidate the reason behind the child labouring. The first and foremost point is that increasing poverty into the society leads this menace as there are lot of families who are unable to fulfill their basic needs and demands so they are indurlge their children into the labouring. Not only this, illeteracy is also the main cause of because poverty striken family do not know the significance of the education so they send their children to beg in the some places in lieu of school. In addition of this, there are some shops where shopkeepers hire a juvenile employer instead of adult because they are working in the less amount . Further, sometimes the bread winner of the family is suffering from deadly diseases so he or she unable to work properly so the children are working for their family.
Also, the loopholes in the laws are the biggest reason of the child labour and government do not take strict action against the violaters .
Every lock has its own key , similarly this problem have their own solution. The prime one is that parents should send their children into the school because it is the effective way to create a educated atmosphere among the society as they get to know about the importance of the study as well as the harmful impact of the child labouring . Furthermore, authorities should render some financial support to the poverty striken families and also should organise some awareness campaigns into the society as it helps the individuals that they get the valuable information by this action. At last , authorities should take some harsh action against the increasing child labouring.
To conclude , after a lot of thoughts and deliberation it is true to say that, there are lot reason behind the child labour . So the mutual action should be taken by the government as well as the society to tackle out this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, similarly, so, well, in addition, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97347480106 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5613945645 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503978779841 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5792043526 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125886450079 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553641686692 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100737648805 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853919654262 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524869968259 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.