the table below shows the percentage of main types of dwelling in Victoria, the Northern Territory, and Tasmania. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant
The table illustrates the proportion of major types of accommodations in Victoria , the Northern Territory and Tasmania.
Overall , The prior dwelling in these 3 areas was house both in 2001 and 2006 .However , only Tasmania was the area that the house became more popular after 5 years.
Looking at the house , The data for choosing house in victoria was the highest with 79 percent in the year 2001 which was nearly 80 times higher than that of other. The figures for semi-attached house and flat were similar with 11 and 9 percent respectively.After 5 years, whereas this area saw a decline by 3 percent in the data for house , a rise of 1 percent for semi-attached house , flat and other was witnessed.To nothern territory , this location experienced a highest upward trend by 12 percent for other and a downward trend by 2 percent for house.
Over 5-year period , compared to other locations , only the figure for house in Tasmania rose by 1 percent.While this place witnessed a fell by 1 percent in other , the percentages of semi-attached house and flat grew 1 percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ajor types of accommodations in Victoria , the Northern Territory and Tasmania. ...
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...rthern Territory and Tasmania. Overall , The prior dwelling in these 3 areas was...
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... 3 areas was house both in 2001 and 2006 .However , only Tasmania was the area tha...
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...was house both in 2001 and 2006 .However , only Tasmania was the area that the hou...
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...ar after 5 years. Looking at the house , The data for choosing house in victoria...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to house'
Suggestion: to house
...ng at the house , The data for choosing house in victoria was the highest with 79 per...
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...s for semi-attached house and flat were similar with 11 and 9 percent respective...
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...ilar with 11 and 9 percent respectively.After 5 years, whereas this area saw a declin...
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...cline by 3 percent in the data for house , a rise of 1 percent for semi-attached h...
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...ise of 1 percent for semi-attached house , flat and other was witnessed.To nothern...
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...ed house , flat and other was witnessed.To nothern territory , this location exper...
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...other was witnessed.To nothern territory , this location experienced a highest upw...
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...2 percent for house. Over 5-year period , compared to other locations , only the ...
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...for house in Tasmania rose by 1 percent.While this place witnessed a fell by 1 percen...
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...e witnessed a fell by 1 percent in other , the percentages of semi-attached house ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85792349727 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96738786625 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2629731517 43.030603864 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.8 112.824112599 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0566154633584 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605116993266 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729944347924 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724380707503 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768005582008 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.