In class, you have had a discussion about playing computer games. Your teacher has asked you to write an article for the school magazine on this subject. Write an article for the school magazine, giving your views.
Are computer games the latter life experience
In the 21st century people lead their lives in hectic rhythms. Computer games are rated as the most common leisure activity in our era. Should we be afraid of video games’ abuse in daily life? I personally believe that computer games are incredibly fun, however they should be used in moderation.
First and foremost, computer games are the most effective solution to a boring or even rainy day, when going out is not possible. Playing is quick as pushing the power button of your laptop. Just a split second and you easily made your day.
Furthermore, playing some games helps your mind to react even quicker and your reaction skills will be improved while you are enjoying your game time.
In addition, despite not being one of the most valuable time spent, making friends, thanks to the online multiplayer platforms, is much easier that going out searching for company. Broaden your horizons is the key and it can be done online!
According to the aforementioned arguments, it is evident that computer games are a huge invention. However, I recommend to all of us to get the fine line between the real life and the virtual one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 1977.66487455 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91133004926 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49543250405 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2585508976 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126842658339 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499275686463 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474322605104 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659018598336 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488833710456 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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