The diagrams below present the estimates and projections of world population from the US Census Bureau
The line charts illustrates the measurement and prediction of population in the world population between 1950 and 2050.
Generally, over a 10-year period , the amount of people will be in upward trends , following at 6,7 billion . However, there was a fluctuation of the world population growth rate from 1950 to 1980, then, it has been going down for 52 years .
It is clear that world population increased steadily between 1950 and 1980, by 1,1
Billion. Inaddition , the figure has been rising gradually . In 2000, the amount of people in the world was 6 billion. Moreover, during 30 years later, it will be reported that world population go up significantly . In 2050, the number of people will reach a peak at approximately 10 billion
By contrast, the growth rate of population around the world fluctuated during the first 30 years. From 1950 to 1970, the percentage of population growth fell down by 0,3 percent and then suddenly increased to 2 percent. Furthermore, the rate remained unchanged between 1980 and 1990. Finally, there has been a sharp decline of the proportion of world population to 0,5 percent, become the lowest one.
- The world natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do? 56
- With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it. 67
- The diagrams below present the estimates and projections of world population from the US Census Bureau 38
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06878306878 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81815601625 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7883803153 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168754208845 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729917024201 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497846290156 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11269220622 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286235522233 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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