The diagram bellow shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
When we use matches at a barbecue we probably do not think about how they are produced. So here I will talk a little bit a diagram that I received explaining how they are made.
There are almost 20 sequential steps to confection a match.
At the beginning of the process the wood arrives and the outside part is peeled of with a blade, the next step is to chop the fresh wood in equal sizes and give them a bath of Ammonium Phosphate at a tank, after that the humidity must be quickly reduced at a dryer machine.
The middle of the process is about stabilizing the wood, so a blower equipment gets in action to remove any residual water and then transfers the pieces to a storage area where the wood sticks will rest for a period of time and controlled temperature for its wood fibers to accommodate and assure resistance properties to guarantee the match will not break when used by consumers.
The last phase is about inserting the matches at the same position and building the head through the addition of three substances that are placed in tanks one after the other (paraffin wax, based chemicals and tip chemicals – in this respective order, which is important to assure the sparkle will be generated with the friction we apply when we want to light up the matches). The head is than dried with room temperature and natural belt movement until it is packed exactly as they will arrive at our homes.
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- The diagram bellow shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- Write about the following topic?Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance.What problems dos this shortage causeWhat measures could be taken to overcome these problems 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When we use matches at a barbecue we probabl...
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...hey are produced. So here I will talk a little bit a diagram that I received explaining ho...
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Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...a where the wood sticks will rest for a period of time and controlled temperature for its wood...
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Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y when we want to light up the matches. The head is than dried with room temperatur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53333333333 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45567863427 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603921568627 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.194830456 43.030603864 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.142857143 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4285714286 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0539799744393 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227613227255 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020614497013 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0271047500482 0.15604864568 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227928874682 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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