University experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?
Recently, the phenomenon of university experience is more important than a university's degree and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Some people argue that the university experience is required mainly as it gives one the skills and knowledge, while others point out to the problems that university degree is important as it is required for getting a job. This essay will elaborate on both the pros and cons of only having the university experience and will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why the university experience is more important than a university's degree but the most conspicuous one lies from the fact that it elevates the exposure and confidence of the students. For example, According to the Monash University, almost 87% of individuals performed stupendously in their practical lives who had the university experience even though they failed to acquire the university's degree. Thus, university experience plays a vital role for the overall amelioration of the capacity building of the students.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of the university experience without the university's degree but the most alarming one stems from the fact that it escalates the inferiority complex in the students. As an illustration, researchers indicate that almost 20% of university students attempted suicide who could not complete their university's degree but had only the university experience. Hence, the university experience without university's degree can have a detrimental effect when it comes to the peace of mind.
In recapitulation, this essay has argued both points of view. In my opinion, the university experience is more important than getting a degree as it shapes one's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47330960854 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10601345181 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516014234875 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2469269001 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.818181818 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470952710634 0.242375264174 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205887354629 0.0925447433944 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111990840568 0.071462118173 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321799085849 0.151781067708 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045643633107 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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