Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous.To what extent do you agree or disagree
In this modern era, due to burgeoning technological advances, more vaccines are produced in order to prevent diseases in children. This has given rise to an important question ' could vaccination harm juveniles'?. It is commonly said that vaccination for the prevention of diseases in minors is detrimental and not useful. In this essay, I totally disagree with the notion
irrefutably, prevention is better than cure so people should take precautions. On that note, inoculation of minors against certain preventable diseases is essential and not harmful due to the following reasons. First and foremost, it helps to safeguard juveniles against the deadly diseases. These days, there are various disease epidemic breakout which can easily be curtailed through inoculation. For instance the polio and measles outbreak in Nigeria have been reduced through vaccination. If the government didn't encourage vaccination against poliovirus, a lot of children would have been down with the virus. On the whole, vaccination is important to avoid certain detrimental diseases.
Secondly, it has been proven by some school of thoughts that inoculation helps to build children immunity. To illustrate, children that gets injected with attenuated viruses or bacteria in the form of vaccines which help boost their immune systems are less likely to fall ill. A recent research carried out in USA has shown that children that undergoes immunisation have better immunity that those that did not. By and large, vaccination help strengths the immune system.
To sum up, expansion in scientific evolutions has made life easier through vaccination. It is imperative and not dangerous to inoculate minors against preventable diseases because it safeguards them against deadly diseases and also boosts their immune system. I reiterate my stand the i totally disagree with the aforementioned statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, by and large, on the whole, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59581881533 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95704085474 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592334494774 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1751387063 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4705882353 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231448131158 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712391654302 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538925406485 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143746822851 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391398327809 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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