A night club just opened near where you live. You are very unhappy about the situation because it disturbs the peace of the neighborhood. Write a letter to your local government official. Say who you are and explain why you are unhappy and suggest what should be done about it
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the terrible situation I have been faced every night.
I am a resident who is life in Northern Village. I had an enjoyable life since I moved here 10 years ago, however, the night club just opened across the street inform my apartment my life is totally changed after that.
To begin with, the night club makes a really big noise at night, also have many drunken people arguing each other even littering bottles making violence. Those various reasons disturb my sleep and life quality.
I have two children in my house, sleeping is very important for them and they need to go to school in the early morning. Therefore, I expect the city council can send the notice to the night club hope they can keep the noise to the minimum level and add more police patrol to avoid violence happen on this street.
I would be more than happy to see improvement in this regard.
sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.47992774663 2.54303337028 255% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712643678161 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0976823593 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.074253624287 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297929521565 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203894164851 0.0603063233224 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0358986066934 0.12726935374 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273150340158 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.