Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach. Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Whether the university should require all faculty to work outside in the relevant to the courses they teach? To large extent, I agree this advise, because let the faculty to work in the relevant field can promote the academic research and teaching. However, this advise does not apply to the faculty in all fields. therefore, I am not agree with this policy.
professor can benefit from the non-academic working experience, because they would know the industrial requirement and social needs better. By conducting the research with most social value, the professors can not only gain higher agreement, but also contribute more to the society. such as, the biological professors have opportunity to work in biological company, he/she would have more comprehensive understanding of current biological needs -- may be some difficulty to struggle with dieases. when he/she return to the college, he/she can focus on the pressing industrial needs, to test more effective drugs to handle the diease, therefore benefit the society. this deduction can extend to other applied science fields. therefore, science study would benefit from working outside the academic.
The advantage of understanding the industrial needs can also extend to teaching, thereby letting students have better preparation for career. when the faculty clearly know the industrial needs, their students would benefit from the more clear and more thorough understanding of career prospect. Compare with the colleages who do not leave the college, an active participant of non-academic and industrial computer faculty would naturaly know the field needs better and what kind of coding quality is necessary in this rapid chaging field. He/She can share his/her perspective with students to help them to become more productive members in the society to gain advantage and competence. In short, the professor who works in industrial field can become effective channel to transfer employers needs to potential employees, which would be beneficial to their students.
Despite of the above advantages, I think I need to point out that requrieing faculty to work outside academic is not always beneficial. some fields, such as pure mathematic and astronomy, are reletaviely weak related to industry. Under this circumstance, faculty cannot find suitable jobs, even they find it, their study cannot benefit the industry, even the society value is facile. The characteristic of these fields make the students cannot find a job that fully fit what they learn. For example, there is not company try to solve the difficult mathematic problems. Thus, requring faculty in these fields to work outside academic is fruitlyess no matter in time or resources.
In a nutshell, requiring faculty to work in the industry can benefit them both in research and teaching. On other hand, force the faculty who does not have strong correlation with industry to follow this rule cannot achieve the ideal object. therefore, even I am fully agree with this advice, but the reasonability should be considered seriously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in short, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2587.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40083507307 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76567423842 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484342379958 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 802.8 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4878829792 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.791666667 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9583333333 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155851082662 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577896113975 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854365747747 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108399584754 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733753623881 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.