Essay topics: Line graph : channel one news viewing figures.
The line graph elucidates the number of viewing figures of channel one news from January to December. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable fluctuation of viewing figures occurred at 11 p.m. and is measured in millions of viewers per day.
To begin with, January to May witnessed a significant upsurge in the number of individuals who watched news at 09.30 p.m., and over the following 7 months, it palpitated sharply in which it finished at just above 3 millions. Furthermore, the amount of viewer at 6 p.m. additionally experienced a gradual oscillation between January, which was at just beneath 5 millions, and November, which made up at just over 3 millions, and erratically, it uplifted moderately by the end of the period shown.
In contrast, over the whole period, the total viewer at 1 p.m. remained stable, and ended at well beyond 1 millions in December. Nonetheless, there was dramatic progress in the total of viewer at 11 p.m. from May through to August, and unexpectedly, it plunged tremendously in the next 4 months to achieve at just less than 1 millions in December.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, well, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89893617021 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9509485857 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2501758085 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.5 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.23603664747 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942125376726 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807753248376 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148698073407 0.0843802449381 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928884883912 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119026085551 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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