Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers
There is a steady growth in population in urban areas around the world as people from rural ones have an increasing tendency to move to major cities. This essay will present numerous factors that trigger this trend as well as how it will affect the locals.
The movement from poorer sides of a country to a more developed parts stems from these incentives. Firstly, major cities offer higher employment opportunities than rural areas because their economy is significantly stronger, enabling them to have a higher demand for employees. As a result, people tend to move to urban areas to seek for employment. Secondly, wages in developed cities are often lucrative, which attracts an overwhelming people who hope that they can earn more. Thirdly, infrastructure in major cities is more modern than that in rural areas so individuals who desire higher living standards have a tendency to move there.
This trend can have several detrimental impacts on the locals’ lives. The first effect is that there tends to be more traffic congestion when population density increases as the number of people commuting to work experiences a surge. This would deteriorate the traffic system which has already been overloaded during rush hours. Furthermore, the job market will become more competitive because of the sharp growth in applicants, hindering the natives’ ability to seek employment as well as potentially putting them out of job. The last negative impact is that higher population density often equates less living space and more costly rent. As more and more people move to major cities, the demand for accommodation there will see a considerable rise, resulting in prohibitively expensive housing prices and smaller living area.
In conclusion, people move to urban areas because of greater job opportunities, economic incentives and better living conditions and this trend can have adverse impacts on the locals’ lives such as heavier traffic, highly competitive job market and expensive rent.
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- Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers. 67
- Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities What are the causes of this trend and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers 71
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36477987421 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85597615852 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6395757033 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.857142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166633392242 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623129768359 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424251396894 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114814860487 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363738343718 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.