a research on a fossil which has some signs of remaining the animal blood
According to the proffessor's opinion, there are some reasonns which can reject the exist theories about remaining some parts of the animal blooding system:
Archealogist have found a fossil, related to tissues era; Breaking leg's bones shows some empty holes in them and some soft textiles; The main assertion about this observation is that they are channels which vessels (cause of proving vessel existance) had been there. The proffessor have said that the holes can be created by bacteria and the soft material can be debris of their colony.
The other reason that some scientist rely on it to prove remaining of the blooding system, is that some red sphere objects can be seen in the bones which contain Iron and they can be signs of blood cells. The proffessor idea is that the objects have been finding in other recent animals fossils (animals which had been living later than the discussing fossil). So it cann't be a strong evidance that imply the discussing subject
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...n and they can be signs of blood cells. The proffessor idea is that the objects ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 52.1666666667 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 407.700716846 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88484848485 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32482510179 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 618.680645161 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.972191979 48.9658058833 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.2 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.6045352989 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 5.45110844103 7% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349473932964 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158768976906 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132103907147 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260177215714 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111707854639 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 11.7677419355 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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