Which one is the most important factor to help you work productively?
Having an environment which is free of noise and distractions
Knowing that you will receive a reward
Doing something you are interested in
Currently, the whole society has witnessed an unprecedented boom, thus people living in the society full of stiff and fierce competition are inclined to augment their working efficiency so as to avoid being deviated from the prosperous advancement of civilization. Under this circumstance, some individuals harbor the idea that having an environment which is free of noise and other distractions is their preferred option, while others reckon that driven by monetary rewards, their working productivity can be ameliorated in a large extent. Personally speaking, I cannot concur with the listed two opinions. I suggest that interest in a specific domain is and has always been the best motivator in driving up our working productivity.
To start with, an interest in a specific domain enables us to be wholly grossed in it, instead of getting distracted by other factors surrounding us. To be more specific, incentivized by the interest, we are more likely to immerse us with the projects that engage our interests, thus other affairs happening to the surrounding have no relevance in us, which absolutely augments our working efficiency. On the contrary, with regard to the environment free of noise and distractions, it makes no sense in elevating our working efficiency. Although there is no time-waster, such as mobile phone notification, social media and things like that, available for us to kill time, we still have other alternatives instead of working efficaciously to fulfill the projects. For instance, individuals who are burdened with the procrastination effect probably just retard the process of fulfilling the projects. In other words, giving a tranquil and serene environment cannot force us to improve efficiency by tearing us apart from distractions.
What’s more, an interest also provides us with energy so that we are more devoted to finishing the mandated tasks given by superiors. When dealing with the projects related to our interests, there is a propensity that we focus on the process of tackling problems with no more attention can be paid on time or energy. Thus, when we finish the tasks, we will not be enslaved with a sense of frustration and exhaustion. While in terms of the material rewards given as momentum, nowadays, the middle class is continuously escalating and each city dweller is enjoying the accumulation of material affluence, therefore, when confronted with material rewards, they will weigh the pros and cons, then make their final decisions. It is investigated that the majority of citizens will not engage in the tasks or highly focus on the projects that fail to spark their interests.
Admittedly, an interest’s great effects on improving working efficiency do not mean that other alternatives are without merits. For instance, giving rewards sometimes can exert advantageous effects on those people who are in imperative needs. Nevertheless, it is more plausible and applicable for majorities of city dwellers to motivate them by their interests.
In a nutshell, I would like to reiterate my opinion that interest is and has always been the optimal stimulus for us to ameliorate our working efficiency since it liberates us from the constraints of distractions and provide us with sufficient energy to combat with pop-up tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, as to, for instance, such as, in other words, on the contrary, to start with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2772.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30019120459 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07974033236 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514340344168 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 876.6 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8789938187 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.894736842 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5263157895 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21052631579 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120446141835 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404464560138 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412437375048 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069400039351 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042823196065 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 86.8835125448 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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