Free educaiton
In today's society, education plays en even more important role in developing our world. Students, now, pay money to study and learn ,so they can be part of it too.Unfortunatly, not every student will be capable of doing so, for most of them are lacking the financial support to both enter the schools they want and to continue their studies.When it comes to education, studying should be gratis and free from all charges.
First, free education encourages students to do better.When a student is relieved from the school charges, he literally appreciates the fact that he no longer has to think about it.Therefore, he,too, tries to study better as way of appreciating this opporunity.Second, students are not the only winners here, society is too. By offering students the opportunity to continue their studies, society will gain a reliable productive workforce that will help it make a better results.Generally,statistics show that the countries who support their students ,are the most advanced ones in terms of innovation and productivity.
Sometimes free education may have the opposite results on students.With everything being easy, students would not find it difficult to give up their schools and studies because simply they didn't earn it at the first place.Students, usually, tend to value the worth of things based on its difficulty and offering them this chance will only cause them waste it.Free education can decrease the quality of teaching too.Most of schools ,today, tend to rely on students' fees in a way of improving the school's facilities and material.However, without that ,schools will not be able to move forward since it will only depend on the money it receives from the government.
In conclusion, education should stay equally available to all regardless of income. This is not only fair, but will also make sure that countries can prosper and develop into the future with a well-educated workforce.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 965.302439024 168% => OK
No of words: 311.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20257234727 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25277672856 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 106.607317073 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594855305466 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 283.868780488 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.36016304 43.030603864 438% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 231.142857143 112.824112599 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.4285714286 22.9334400587 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0519432384787 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210690656846 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248508398602 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0316922094583 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188779584955 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.2329268293 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.3012195122 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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