Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays with the increase of modern privet private schools, parents tend to send their children to these kinds of schools because of more educational benefits. There is a debate all community members should be obliged to contribute for to supporting state schools no matterif their children study in private or state schools. I completely agree with the proponents of the mentioned statement.
People who support the idea state that generally, private schools operate under the Department of Education’s supervision which is working with governmental funding. This means that these kinds of schools should follow the rules and frameworks which are legislated by the Department of Education. In addition, all of us are a part of the same society and we should contribute to improve our community’s educational prospects by paying taxes and enhance our country’s development by educating productive workforces. It is not a reasonable excuse to say we do not use a special facility and therefore we do not have to pay money for it. For instance, in this case, it could be mentioned that there are several highways which the government builds and maybe we never use some of them.
I admit that it is unfair to expect families who send their children to private schools to pay additional quota for investing inpublic education services; however, the profits would come back to all society members by the founding of a developed education system.
In summary, in my opinion, all people who live in a country should participate in improving educational structures by accepting to invest a part of the taxes that they pay in this fundamental issue.
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
...d to contribute for to supporting state schools no matterif their children study in pri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17843866171 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0204089217 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546468401487 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9966036648 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.3 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397624316695 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14565957707 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642309571322 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230399835357 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662896149382 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.