Some people become famous at a young age. Is it a good thing or a bad thing?
When they are youths a significant number of people are popular with their work and dedications. I believe that to become well known at such age is best of best, because such activities increase confidence level, and increases the creativity level of the person.
One of the major thing that must of the people loses is confidence. So the person can do really good at their young age then task achievement level is increased also enhance the success ratio. Young people are energetic and logically sound than other age groups, they can adopt changes and achieve them. For example, The young businessman in Nepal is just 25, he started his business with $100 but after some years he has 100 and more stores in Kathmandu. This is all from the result of his logical power and effective manipulation of the money in the right sector. Although those abilities are not from birth, we can learn those from our day-to-day activities.
Again, youths are more creative and able to create new ideas rather than other age groups their innovations and talents are powerful. Many news is highlights of different newspaper, like youths developing helicopter and new technologies. These days generations are not being busy in new technologies but are showing interest in different fields.
In conclusion, Well known at an early age make us popular and it helps us to enhance our creativity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: Much; Little
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: Much news; A good deal of news
...r innovations and talents are powerful. Many news is highlights of different newspaper, l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01408450704 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64541388821 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657276995305 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0431936191 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200981339864 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627833087186 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637056459898 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108219261903 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074424207936 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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