With the increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are not able to do the work which people use to perform.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this Trend?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience. write at least 250 words.
It's indeed true that expansion of Technology in various fields created by gigantic competition for human beings in performing of task. In the recent years robots used to do plethora of task instead of people. There are both advantages and disadvantages of Technology advancement.
To embark upon , one of the main advantages is the increase in efficiency of performing activity. This is because machines don't feel fatigue in doing same repetitive nature of work in factories. Secondly, quality of manufactured material is also improved and they can produce complex designs which are beyond human imagination. For example, the use of 3D printers in textile industry has powerful impact on the current market. Last but the least, the installing of Technology is one time investment for an organisation or company which definitely saves company from financial burden and other human factors like strike during factory shift to hike the salary.
On the other hand, the disadvantages are also but not outweighs the positive side. First of all, the unemployment ratio increased drastically due to the automation in every industry. Secondly, environment is also badly affected by the Machines because more consumption of fossil fuels required to run the Machines which surely increase pollution in the atmosphere. Finally, micro industries which are also suffered from companion in terms of technology advancement.To illustrate Tesla spending more penury on automation to create more supply and to capture vast market shares.
In the conclusion, in terms of time management, quantity manufacturing and free from human factors technology advancement over shades the darker side like unemployment and competition issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53992395437 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02127205421 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1233910303 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178621966962 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624830211904 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321079602023 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096199117078 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510240820437 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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