Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued by some people that moving from urban areas to suburbs is beneficial for big companies and industry. I feel that its drawbacks are outweighed by its benefits.
On the one hand, Perhaps the major drawback for big companies and factories, which decide to relocate into suburban areas, is that they have to invest in new facilities and buildings. This amount of money could be either be used to pay for employees’ wages or to improve the current infrastructure of the company. Secondly, moving takes time to feel comfortable in a new place, decreasing the output of products or services. In addition, companies will have to recruit new stuff, which is the time-consuming process. As a result, they might have to feel that they do not have enough money to be stable financially. For example, when Ziyo, the Uzbek textile company, experienced movement, it had to borrow money from the national bank to pay for its workers.
On the other hand, there are various benefits for companies that move to a small town or a village. Firstly, they will be able to employ cheap labor, meaning that there are many unemployed people who accept to work for the less amount of money in such places. Furthermore, taxes for air and water pollution as well as renting a building are less expensive than those in big cities. As a result, they can make more profit than they do in their previous places. For instance, Ziyo, the Uzbek textile company, began to increase its profit by about a quarter within two years, which is a good accomplishment.
In conclusion, although relocation has short-term drawbacks, I feel that it is better for companies and industries, because it has long-term benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87889273356 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80299029407 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1924659512 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170561134774 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619558058088 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534691207054 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11837684408 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502818746199 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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