You would like to work overseas, write a letter to an employment agency. Write:-
- what job you would like to apply
- what companies are you looking for
- why do you want to work overseas
Dear Sir,
my name is Saad Mubarak and have an overall work experience of 10 years in design for satellite networks, therefore, I am writing to you as I would like to apply for solution architect jobs in Singapore. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I am presently working with a satellite operator in India and handle domestic customers, therefore, I am keen to pursue opportunities in Singapore as it the business hub for many telecom operators. Although I would love to work for satellite service providers who roll out services for their customer on existing infrastructure however I am also open to exploring opportunities with satellite Integration companies which provide end to end telecommunication solution to the customers.
I believe working overseas will provide me with global exposure and experience which will make my profile stronger for future opportunities with potential employers. Additionally working in a foreign country will also provide me with an opportunity to travel and explore their local culture.
I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely
saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, my name is Saad Mubarak and have an over...
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Line 6, column 167, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...opportunities with potential employers. Additionally working in a foreign country will also ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35838150289 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19299159027 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630057803468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.5587614925 44.8134815571 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.875 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199342923155 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731905981737 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908058023652 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120901269836 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997692335417 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.