Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there is more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages or disadvantages of living in a house compared to living in an apartment.
There is no deny that some people are comfortable living in a individual house while others are more keen at staying in an apartment. In this essay we will look into reasons why its more beneficial to live in an independent home than high rise buildings.
One of the benefits of having a of own home is more area. This area could be useful for varieties of activities for instance, gardening, kids play area. All of these make mind more relax and happy where everyone can enjoy themselves with this leisure activities. Secondly, when you have your own home you have the option to extend by building another floor over your current house. You can also arrange a small party just outside your home if in case in future accommodation requirement changes. Where as, all this are not possible when you live in an apartment.
Another benefits of home is personal space. For example when we live in apartment we tend to have less privacy since multiple home are in the same floor and you cannot have party majorly due to building rules and restrictions on loud music and alcohol. In homes we need not have to pay extra money for parking space which is huge advantage as it save quite a huge chunk of money for an individual. Many apartments have separate parking space and they are used by building owners as a way of monetary gain by having added fee on them.
In conclusion having a home or apartment is matter of personal choice but as there are an ample amount of positives when one stays at house, it will be wise to choose this option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56115107914 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4299300001 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4882804859 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215934267317 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883725531609 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121954254172 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155467939193 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14125505846 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.