The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
There is no deny that today is an era of internet and telecommunications. We live in world of mobiles, televisions, computer systems and laptops being connected to internet all around the clock. I believe having such kind of connectivity aids us in access to vast pool of knowledge for any individual and in this essay, I will put forward my views and support why it is a advantageous to have so.
To begin with, in internet we can browse and view myriad of topics. For instance, topics including cooking, travelling, music, dance and many others are available for anyone one to teach themselves life skill or even enjoy. Previously, people were not having such plethora of information content at one place and so it is great boon to have at a singular place as it reduces effort and time. In addition, to that knowledge about world such as what, where of any place helps a new person or traveler to see and explore the place which was not possible earlier. To illustrate, using Google Maps from internet can give you details of your near by locality or distant corner of world just within few clicks. Hence, I state that the benefits of internet will continue to proliferate in coming years.
Secondly, since internet can be access by anyone and anywhere in the world, it is being sustainably used for education. Today, children from rural and places which are hard to reach because of geographical barriers are learning and educated via online classes. To add to that point, there are multifarious points being free, fast and easily accessible such a medium is further helping to reduce illiteracy rate. For example, in India government has started a movement called "Digital India" which primarily focus on connecting villages to cities via latest telecommunication services. So, having such initiatives is to explore all corners of internet as a information powerhouse.
In conclusion, I opine there are far too many advantages of having such access to information pool from the internet. Furthermore, all government should take active step in building sustainable infrastructure for better and faster internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08238636364 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96506948888 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607954545455 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3324904574 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11514440054 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039330525894 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023692880775 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744875953061 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101847379943 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.