Travelling in other country
I travelled Vietnam last winter, but the weather was hot like summer days which the winter that I never been experienced.
In this statement I am strongly agree with the statement that traveling abroad is more advantage that traveling in my country even its beautiful and charming. Because of the feeling we felt in different place more incomparable with same place in different location. I have thousand of reason to support my opinion but I would like to mention three essential reason why I agree with the statement.
First of all, In my opinion travelling is exploring something new such as learning about other society, culture and people. Especially about the culture I would like to highlight example based on my life. While I was travelling to Vietnam, their lifestyle was completely different from us due to its climate and population density, they usually wake up earlier and eat small amount of nutritional food also food places where usually located center of the roadway. In my country, I have never seen such thing so this exploration amazed me.
Secondly, In my daily life, like other people, I do general activities such as waking up, working and sleeping. This is called comfort zone. Continues cycle of comfort zone may lead to laziness of life, so to freshen up it is better to get out of our comfort zone by travelling abroad. When traveling abroad our lifestyle changed during that time and make us feel like different person. It is the feeling that i felt from traveling to abroad.
Lastly, Not only enjoying ourselves is advantages of travelling, also by admiring the country development I urge myself that I would like to contribute my country to have the development. For example, when I was in USA for three-month, the development of that country was striking higher that my hometown, I am not only enjoying the country, I also learned that I should contribute my country until it develops like USA. It is more beneficial than above two reason.
In sum, I would like to mention that we should travel abroad to get benefit from the country by feeling the freshened, change our life cycle and increase our encouragement to improve our country not only we admiring the foreign country also learning from the cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
...ike summer days which the winter that I never been experienced. In this statement I am s...
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Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...nced. In this statement I am strongly agree with the statement that traveling abroa...
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Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ountry even its beautiful and charming. Because of the feeling we felt in different pla...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ame place in different location. I have thousand of reason to support my opinion but I w...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ifferent person. It is the feeling that i felt from traveling to abroad. Lastly,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...own, I am not only enjoying the country, I also learned that I should contribute ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88481675393 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69855040392 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497382198953 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.149504548 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.764705882 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285487791154 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832678581619 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789736968185 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137576170781 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417562143173 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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