You are currently living in a rented flat but will be moving out soon. Write a letter to the owner of the flat to thank him and introduce one of your friends to move in. In your fetter, you should:
• thank the owner of the flat for being so nice and helpful
• explain why you are leaving
• introduce your friend to him
Dear Martin ,
I am tenant in your apartment.I would like to inform you that I am leaving this flat in next month and want to thank you for all the assistance you gave me.
I am very lucky to had a house owner like you.Y ou supported me in all my difficult situations and gave me more freedom.you cared me as my parent and I would like to thank you abundantly for being kind to me.
I got a job in ernakulam, which is near to my home town.So it is easy for me to access my home from my office.On the one side i am very happy to be in my home,but at the same time i feel sad to vacate from this house.
I would like to introduce my friend to you,who like to stay here.she is working in my office and from thrissur.she is now staying in a hostel,which she found difficult to live.So recommended this flat to her and she like to rent this flat.
I hope you would like to accommodate one who is like me.
Yours faithfully,
Neenu varghese.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Martin , I am tenant in your apartment.I would ...
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Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tenanted'.
Suggestion: tenanted
Dear Martin , I am tenant in your apartment.I would like to infor...
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Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...Martin , I am tenant in your apartment.I would like to inform you that I am leav...
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Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Y
...ery lucky to had a house owner like you.Y ou supported me in all my difficult si...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ad a house owner like you.Y ou supported me in all my difficult situations and ga...
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Line 6, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...rnakulam, which is near to my home town.So it is easy for me to access my home fro...
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Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...for me to access my home from my office.On the one side i am very happy to be in m...
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Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... my home from my office.On the one side i am very happy to be in my home,but at t...
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Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...ne side i am very happy to be in my home,but at the same time i feel sad to vacate f...
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Line 6, column 181, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y to be in my home,but at the same time i feel sad to vacate from this house. ...
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Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...would like to introduce my friend to you,who like to stay here.she is working in my ...
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Line 8, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
... thrissur.she is now staying in a hostel,which she found difficult to live.So recommen...
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Line 8, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ostel,which she found difficult to live.So recommended this flat to her and she li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14594594595 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48975818627 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1158882841 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.833333333 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 16.8248392259 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219608726227 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115919486126 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570893013864 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12552321452 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06211563391 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.38 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.