Why go to university?
Because higher education could have many good implications in life. You will find more job opportunities with huge amount turnover and great bonuses. In general, being a specialist has been become more important as well as humans’ knowledge is increasing and its assertion for having comfortable life is ascending continuously. This trend makes mankind to dig up science barriers may find better lifestyle. I think the following reasons are able to persuade one to attend in university:
First of all, getting an academic certification will promote your social position on the view of your family, clan, friends etc. It will possible for you, thereby, convince who should accept you and say Yes. For example, as a suitor, the girl’s folk consider it as an asset.
The second, if you were to find a job, you would free to grab classy job offers! As I mentioned it above, one of the strong reasons for keeping education in university, it is job issues. In other hand, when you have been recruited in advance, your payment will add or you would promote by the superior. Of course, remember that nobody can vouch getting job to you, here, we are talking about existence of more probability.
The third item, implies to sense of being useful person and rescuing of hopeless. In other word, you are your self’s mentor by acquiring ability of managing critical situation during the life. Literacy makes its host open-minded and changes its personality. According to experience and as it is a common stereotype (I think true stereotype) in community, a wide range of narrow mind people are who have not had any higher education degree. Dealing with different cults, cultures, races makes a great forum to entrench yourself in the real world or life. Major percentage of personality growth and developing communicating skills happen in that forum.
As summary, we should go to university to discover new world. University’s effects on people are indispensable as they make a nice future for the host country. Everyone feels distinct difference between university graduates and other people. In comparison with countries with high rate of illiteracy, it is figured out that poor or under developing countries, do not pay enough attention to their universities. It is requisite of turning to successful person that attend in university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because higher education could have many good i...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...iversity graduates and other people. In comparison with countries with high rate of illite...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, third, well, for example, i think, in general, of course, talking about, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13577023499 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92704783411 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613577023499 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2691622648 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2380952381 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0599429028087 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225443768443 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628206703997 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0377927103573 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755854207146 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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