You have just started a new course at college and your tutor has asked you to write him a letter telling him something about yourself.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
Dear sir,
I am neenu varghese, new student in your class. I am writing this letter in response to your query about myself.
I am from angamaly, a small town in ernakulam district of kerala, now staying near the college as a paying guest. my family includes father,mother and a brother. family income is based on a business, which is owned by my father.
I completed my professional degree in engineering and with the sole aim to become a lecturer i joined for post graduation in the same field. I believe that after conquering this degree, i could fulfil my ambition.
I consider myself as an extrovert, moreover i would like to make new contacts especially with youngsters, so that it helps me to keep my mind young and energetic. so, I decided to become a lecturer. I am a person who like to learn new things and always happy to convey any information to others.
I hope you could get enough information about myself from this letter.
Yours faithfully,
neenu varghese
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-18 | Neenu martin | 73 | view |
| 2019-01-11 | Khushleen | 81 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ing near the college as a paying guest. my family includes father,mother and a bro...
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , mother
... paying guest. my family includes father,mother and a brother. family income is based o...
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Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
...y includes father,mother and a brother. family income is based on a business, which is...
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Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... with the sole aim to become a lecturer i joined for post graduation in the same ...
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Line 6, column 187, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ieve that after conquering this degree, i could fulfil my ambition. I consider...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... degree, i could fulfil my ambition. I consider myself as an extrovert, moreov...
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Line 8, column 45, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nsider myself as an extrovert, moreover i would like to make new contacts especia...
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Line 8, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...me to keep my mind young and energetic. so, I decided to become a lecturer. I am a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77906976744 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8022773324 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8272527428 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162678521358 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607340872323 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765520192928 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870557470198 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920182936264 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.