It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is certainly true that, most of the people nowadays are looking forward to settle down in the urban area. It is often argued that, it is the positive development, whilst other disagree and think that choices of living in the rural area is more favorable to every family in regards to avoid the complexity and crowd-ness of city life. This essay agrees that, living in a town would have maximum opportunity to work along with getting access to the more comprehensive health facilities.
With regards to the positive concern, the idea of living in the modern area like city, town; people get maximum opportunity to work in multinational companies and make their family strong in financial concern. Moreover, in city area maximum of the modern business along with big enterprises are established where people with less experience and education simply get opportunity to work there and provide maximum happiness to their family. It is therefore agreed that, people’s preference to be settled in city area leads to increase family income standard and keep up with adequate health facility to maintain healthy family functioning. For example, this is most evident in my country that, family living in a urban area are much more happy with all the resources available than the people of rural area.
However, many disagree and feel that, rural lifestyle is simple and people are marginally satisfied with all the available resources to shape their future goal. Similarly, with a bit higher struggle, people from village area can also experience multiple facilities related to health, education, entertainment and the like. Despite this, urban life allows individual with more advance opportunity to fulfill their economic and other objective in quite shorter period is still the best way to reduce the time consuming service of rural lifestyle and this essay clearly disagree on the view of happiness of residing in rural area. For instance, a recent study of 2019 conducted by the department of urban department, Nepal found that 90% of the people residing city area are satisfied with the urban facility and opportunity in comparison to living in rural area.
In conclusion, while people preferences of living in city area allow them with more reliable facility in multiple sectors, some people still believe that following the rural life also leads to the advancement of living condition. However, I personally think that, residing urban area would have more opportunity to make their family life more resourceful to fulfill the family needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to settling'.
Suggestion: to settling
...the people nowadays are looking forward to settle down in the urban area. It is often arg...
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Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... area is more favorable to every family in regards to avoid the complexity and crowd-ness of ...
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Line 2, column 715, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nt in my country that, family living in a urban area are much more happy with all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, similarly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19417475728 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66832256848 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466019417476 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0688442832 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.615384615 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6923076923 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.087822336099 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402344874385 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466277239778 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737812963168 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378091685857 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.